Act 1 scene 1 summary
Gregory and Sampson are talking to each other about girls in the house of montagues and what they would do.
Abraham and Balthasar enter and the colliers mack a fight with them by biting there thump at them
Benvolio enters and attempts to stop the fight but does not succeed only made it worse because Tybalt enters and thought that Benvolio was fighting with the colliers so Benvolio and Tybalt also end up fighting and then the citizens of Verona join in with the fight
But prince escalus enters in his train and stops the fight he tells them that however starts the fight next will be put to death
And then the montugue asked for Benvolio Romeos cuisine to talk to Romeo Romeo says to Benvolio that he is in love
By Tobias sonnex
September 21, 2015 at 10:28 pm
Hi Tobias,
The good aspect of this summary is that it’s brief, as it should be, and you’ve captured most of the key events.
You’ll want to work on your grammar, spelling and in some cases word choice. I’m not sure how it came about, but words like “cuisine” have made their way into your summary in places where they make no sense. Some of your sentences also run together.
Are you able to have a careful look at these and let me know if you need assistance from me identifying and resolving them?
Thanks kindly,
CW
September 21, 2015 at 10:28 pm
P.S. I really hope you choose to perform again as that soliloquy from Macbeth last year was simply outstanding.