Old House,2002 (surrounded by the Death Gloom Forest)

It was a dark and misty night you where young and scared the world was still unknown to you an it seemed like anything was possible. You had no idea that what was about to happen that night would change your life forever. It was 13:00 in the morning when it happened you woke up to the strange sound of someone urgently knocking at your door your family where still asleep so you decided to find out what the sound was. Your house was cold as it was an old house and did not have very good installation so the place was almost always cold. You walked down the stairs with a tension in you. Your hands where clammy as you where afraid of what lied on the other side of the door you wrapped your hand around the handle and slowly pulled the old wooden door open the hinges where rusty so the door creaked when you opened it and it made the atmosphere just that little bit worse. You peeked round the side of the door, to your surprise there was nothing there you looked out side and was petrified by what you saw there right in front of you at  the border of death-gloom forest was  something out of this world it floated there it made you feel like the only people who existed where you an it. It was dressed in White and had a strong green glow around it and where it walked darkness followed it was coming towards you wanted to run but you were shocked and felt like time and space itself had stopped you soon realised that there was nothing you could do. It touched you and images flow through your head it was doing something to you and you had no idea what you had no control over your body and that was the last thing you remembered the next morning you woke up in bed thinking it was all a dream.

Old House,2012 (surrounded by the Death Gloom Forest)

I was walking home after an exhausting day of school and I decided to take a short cut home as I was desperate to go on the PS3 and that was when it happened. The route I took I did not like there was something about it which made me cringe and put shivers through my spine. As I was walking through the forest I felt as if I was being watched but I was certain that there was no one there. I began to walk faster because a bad filling was flowing through my veins

I walked down the gritty slim like path listing to the Eco of the sound of my feet I could see a strange light ahead glowing a odd green couloir it made me feel uncomfortable suddenly it was behind me I started to walk with a speedy pace it got faster and I got faster with it. A huge gust of wind blow my torch out the area around me was pick black I wanted to stop but I knew that was not a opsion i kept on going tripping over everythink I could feel blood running down my face I could not take it any more the ground shock and rocks blocked my way that was when itch ought to my self there is no hope left my sight faded away and I began to feel like I no longer existed I could hear the dripping of water near by and a strange kind of damp smell and that is the last thing I could remember.  “And that is the end of the story boys. Nothing left to say the story still remands a secret till this day. Anyway thets get back to the party”

You have a blurry vision from the sleep in your eyes. A shiver from the tangy ness of your aprocot flow up your spin. Before you where ready to leave Your front door swung open with a bang and you rushed out with your heart pounding from the bang of the door. After you left the house You put your hands in your soft fury pockets to keep them warm. As You walked along side the path you realised a bad filling flowing throw your veins. You just could not stop thinking of the things that could happen. You was afraid that your thoughts would influences your future in a negative way You tried to stop thinking but You just could not do it. The wind made the leafs on the thin skinny trees shake as if there was something flying throw the trees. It was still dark and You felt like You was the only being awake on the planet. Before it began to rain you walked into the train station. As You walked past the gate You smelt the smell of metal coins from the top up machines nearby. You heard all the cars on the road beside you drive pass with the boring quite sound of its engine.

How does Baz Luhrmann keep the spirit of Shakespearian theatre alive in his interpretation of Romeo and Juliet?

Baz Luhrmann has successfully kept the spirit of Shakespearean theatre alive in his interpretation of the play using the theme of the old day (The Elizabethan age.) but the context of the modern-day. Some of the many things that Baz Luhrmann has done to keep the same spirit as Shakespeare’s original version of the play which we will be looking at. Are The Idea of fait, Metaphor’s, semantic field, events, pathetic fallacy and dramatic irony. So that is what I will be exploring and looking into in this exam.

In Shakespeare play Romeo and Juliet at the beginning it starts with the prologue and in the prologue it says:

“From forth the fatal lions of these two foes a pair of star-crossed lovers take their life, whose misadventure piteous overthrows doth with their death bury their parents strife.” That is an example of fait as it tells us that in this play two people from different families who love each other are going to kill them self’s so that is an example or idea of fait in Rome and Juliet. Another example of fait in Romeo and Juliet is when Romeo has a dream that he is in a church and Romeo finds him self dead this happened before the party and he feels that something bad is going to happen at the party due to this dream. Both of these examples of fait have been dealt with well or kept the same by Baz Luhrmann. For the first one Baz Luhrmann made the prologue be presented by a news reporter on a TV which is a good transfer to a modern-day theme. Then Romeo’s dream before the party was shown by him walking down a path with modern LED lights in the form of a cross and plants in pots and also fake candles. These things suggest that he might be walking down a path in a church where something is being celebrated or a funeral is happening. So Baz Luhrmann done a good job of making it look modern and still keep the same spirit as Shakespeare had made and intended to in theatre.

In Shakespeare version of the play (Romeo and Juliet) at Act 1 Scene 4 he uses a metaphor which is what I will be talking about in this section of the essay. The metaphor which I will use as an example is the one in Act 1 Scene 4 as I believe that it is a very important metaphor in the play and it has a hidden meaning. In act 1 scene 4 Romeo says this:

“I fear too early, for my mind misgives

Some consequence yet hanging in the stars

Shall bitterly begin his fearful date

Which this night’s revels, and expire the term

Of a despised life closed in my breast

By some vile forfeit of untimely death.

But he that hath the steerage of my course,

Direct my sail. On lusty gentlemen.”

The part which says “But he that hath the steerage of my course, Direct my sail.” Is a metaphor this is a metaphor because he speaks as if he is a boat which is an object not a person so that makes it a metaphor. And the reason I think that this is an important part of the play Romeo and Juliet is because he is saying that somebody controls him and decides what he does and what will happen to him and he can not do much about it so he just goes with it and does not resist and I think the boat is a clever way of saying it to the reader or the audience. In Baz Luhrmann’s version of the play he did not change much to show that bit of the play but he did make Romeo have a facial expression which showed us the audience that he was extremely worried about that dream and that he could not do any think about it.

Shakespeare puts a semantic field around Romeo in Romeo and Juliet. Some of the reasons why I think there is a semantic field around Romeo in the play is because every thing that happened makes it feel as if it is Romeo’s destiny. For example the coincidence that happened in Act I, Scene v of the play where, out of all the people in the world, the servant who had the list for the Capulet party found Romeo to ask him to read the list because the Capulet servant could not read. Also in the movie the Artist (Baz luhramann) kept in the movie a vital part which was an important coincidence that changed everything but because it was in the modern-day Baz luhramann put it on a TV rather than a serving man finding Romeo.

Surprisingly there where many more of these vital coincidences, for example when Romeo had a dream that the party he was going to was going to lead to his death but he is still going to go because he feels as if it is his destiny to go to the party so he does not fight it and just goes with it. In the both the play and the movie it really does make an atmosphere of mystery and meaning at the same time. In order to strengthen this semantic field, Shakespeare uses metaphors an example of this is when Romeo talks as if he was a ship because he says things such as “but he hath the steerage of my course direct my sail!” In that same speech by Romeo he is trying to say that he feels as if god is guiding him and stirring him towards his fiat which creates a semantic field.

In addition to this There is one last thing which creates the semantic field around Romeo this is that at the very beginning of the play in the prologue it says “where two star crossed lovers take there life’s” this creates a semantic field because it makes it feel as if it is fate and that means that it is going to be his fait to die with Juliet this creates a strong but simple semantic field.
And that is why I think that Romeo has a semantic field around him in the play.

There is another really important thing which Baz Luhrmann has captured well in his play this is pathetic fallacy. In Baz Luhrmann version of the play Romeo and Juliet he has included lots of pathetic fallacy for example when Romeo killed Tybalt because Tybalt killed Mercutio Baz Luhrmann placed a storm in the back ground and that is a example of pathetic fallacy. Another example is when Belthesar comes to Romeo and in forms him that Juliet is dead he gets angry and drives to the church the police chase after him and a thunder storm begins that is pathetic fallacy and also dramatic irony this is because we the audience all know that Juliet is not dead and is sleeping from the potion that friar Lawrence gave to her but Romeo did not know because the letter which friar Lawrence sent to Romeo was not received because of a plague in the town and that is a example of dramatic irony because we know but they do not.

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(This is being translated from where Mercutio long speech is Act 1 Scene 4)

Mercutio

she is a little fairies mid wife she is about the size of a stone which lays in an old man ring. she is carried around by atoms and she travels over men noses as they sleep.the wheels are made of spiders legs and the cover is made out of the wings of grass hoppers, her tracks are made out of the smallest spider webs, and her collar shines as bright as the moon, her whip is a thread connected to a cricket bone, her wagon driver is a small grey coated bug, not half the size of a round worm from a young girls finger, her chariot is a hazelnut shell that was made by an old grubby squirrel they have made wagons for as long as you can remember and happily she rides ever night through the brains of lovers and every night they dream about love. she rides over royal advisers knees and they dream about advising. she rides over lawyers fingers and straight away they dream about fees. she rides over lady lips and they dream of kissing. often queen Mab gets angry and gives people blisters on their lips to stop the smell of rich foods that is what makes her mad. she rides over mail men lips and they dream of getting a fresh nice suit. and sometimes she comes with a pig tail and itches a person’s nose as they lie down sleeping and they dream of large donations.sometimes she rides over soldiers necks and they dream of cutting foreign enemies throats and beating Spanish ambushes and stay healthy. and then drums in his ears awake him but he is scared by the dream so he prays and goes back to sleep.she is the same queen Mab who plates the horses hair in the night and hardens the horses hair lots of misfortune hangs their.when girls lie down on their backs they get false dreams that could happen she is the one

Romeo

enough Mercutio enough what you say means nothing

Mercutio

true I am talking about dreams which are a small part of the brain dreams are not true they are fantasy and they are as thin as the air and less predictable than the wind which blows north and then gets angered and turns south.

Benvolio

the wind that you are talking about is caring you away and it will Mack us late for dinner and the party will have finished.

Romeo

no I think we are going there to early and I have a feeling that there is a consequence waiting there for me which will lead me to my own death but who ever has control over me can decide what happens let’s go gentlemen

Benvolio

beat the drum

By Tobias Sonnex

act 5 scene 3 opens with Paris telling his page to fetch his torch so that he can see the scene is set a Juliet crib but Romeo and Balthasar come along they fight with pairs and Romeo wins by stabbing himself then he enters the catapult crib and then walks over to Juliet Balthasar stays out side before going to Juliet and kissing her then drinking the poison he goes over to Tybalt tomb and apologies to him. just as Romeo drinks the poison Juliet wakes up and have seen him dead this made Juliet upset so she kills her self then the watchman calls people to come and they investigate the deaths and then the two households Mack peace and tell each other that they will Mack a big statue of Romeo and Juliet in gold.

THE END

In act 5 scene 1 Romeo is meant to receive friar Lawrence letter about Juliet being alive and the whole escape plan from friar John but because there was an illness in Mantua friar John could not gain access to Romeo and so he returned and friar Lawrence was not happy so he decided that he would go and bust open Juliet tomb himself. when Romeo herded from Balthasar the incorrect news that Juliet was dead Romeo was massively upset so he wanted to kill himself he remembered that there was an apothecary which was run by a poor old man. Romeo went over to the apothecary and asked for Some poison but the old man said that he can not sell it to him but when Romeo offered him a massive amount of gold for it soon changed but Romeo did say that this gold is more harmful than the poison you are giving me.

In act 4 scene 5 everybody is ready and propered for the wedding so they ask the nurse where Juliet is and she shouts out she is dead they do not believe this so they order to see her and capulet confirms that she is defiantly dead her blood is cold and her skin is pale and her limbs are stiff every one is upset and they say that they are nothing without her.

Lady capulet and the nurse are trying to mack food for Juliet wedding and capulet says be quick you are running out of time serving men enter with things for the cook capulet then tells the nurse to go and wake up Juliet and help her get ready.

In act 4 scene 2 Juliet returns from friar Lawrence’s cell to home she instantly asks here per ants for forgiveness but she lies she reels her nurse to have a brake and do what she wants meanwhile Juliet will drug herself.